Make some goddamn new chapters, Suomibrony
I have no idea who is it, and I`ll know it not soon, (because this story is not translated into Russian yet, and my English is very bad)). But I'm crazy like such a detailed, realistic style. Pity that you do not paint in this style very often.
you do can get a grasp of her agony in this pic
it rubs the lotion on the skin or it gets the hose again
Not a bad attempt to render them in a more realistic style.